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Saturday, June 21st, 2025 10:32 pm (UTC)
I felt sorry for your main character at the start of this, abandoned by her parents with grandma while they went off and had a grand adventure, but then they died of the very diseases they warned her about. Yikes!

This was a fun and engaging story. I enjoyed the fact that in your character's family, women get the real work done, and of course Grandmother, ruling like a queen and insisting on only the highest quality. Great story.

Dan

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