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  <title>Erulisse Dances</title>
  <subtitle>Artistic Endeavors with Wings of Light</subtitle>
  <author>
    <name>erulissedances</name>
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  <updated>2012-09-29T10:45:55Z</updated>
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    <id>tag:dreamwidth.org,2011-04-06:733571:112169</id>
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    <title>Self Doubts and Thoughts</title>
    <published>2012-09-29T10:45:55Z</published>
    <updated>2012-09-29T10:45:55Z</updated>
    <category term="beta"/>
    <category term="editing"/>
    <category term="writing"/>
    <dw:music>George Gershwin - Rhapsody in Blue</dw:music>
    <dw:mood>stressed</dw:mood>
    <dw:security>public</dw:security>
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    <content type="html">I'm reading a book recommended to me by my friend Susan called &amp;quot;&lt;a href="http://www.barnesandnoble.com/w/self-editing-for-fiction-writers-renni-browne/1103269502?ean=9780060545697"&gt;Self-Editing  for Fiction Writers, Second Edition, How to Edit Yourself Into Print&lt;/a&gt;&amp;quot; by  Renni Brown. I've got this loaded onto my phone for reading, and Sharon Kay  Penman's &amp;quot;Here Be Dragons&amp;quot; loaded onto my Nook. I was reading through the basics  on showing instead of telling, character voice and action, etc., and of course I  was mentally revising what I have recently written because that's what I do when  I read editing books like this. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt; &lt;div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; CLEAR: both" class="separator"&gt;&lt;a style="MARGIN-LEFT: 1em; MARGIN-RIGHT: 1em" href="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-EzM-JMGhqXk/UGbP9yAjPlI/AAAAAAAAGRQ/bjbarrpbGIM/s1600/Books%2B-%2BSelf-Editing.jpg" imageanchor="1"&gt;&lt;img border="0" src="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-EzM-JMGhqXk/UGbP9yAjPlI/AAAAAAAAGRQ/bjbarrpbGIM/s320/Books%2B-%2BSelf-Editing.jpg" width="265" height="400" closure_uid_dbcsrh="2" alt="" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span class="cut-wrapper"&gt;&lt;span style="display: none;" id="span-cuttag___1" class="cuttag"&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;b class="cut-open"&gt;(&amp;nbsp;&lt;/b&gt;&lt;b class="cut-text"&gt;&lt;a href="https://erulissedances.dreamwidth.org/112169.html#cutid1"&gt;to revise or not...&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/b&gt;&lt;b class="cut-close"&gt;&amp;nbsp;)&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;div style="display: none;" id="div-cuttag___1" aria-live="assertive"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;img src="https://www.dreamwidth.org/tools/commentcount?user=erulissedances&amp;ditemid=112169" width="30" height="12" alt="comment count unavailable" style="vertical-align: middle;"/&gt; comments</content>
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    <id>tag:dreamwidth.org,2011-04-06:733571:94787</id>
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    <title>A Break in the Heat</title>
    <published>2012-07-07T10:26:50Z</published>
    <updated>2012-07-07T10:26:50Z</updated>
    <category term="heat"/>
    <category term="writing"/>
    <category term="editing"/>
    <category term="aina"/>
    <category term="le tour de france"/>
    <dw:music>Gareth Farr - Waterfalls: 2nd movement</dw:music>
    <dw:mood>relieved</dw:mood>
    <dw:security>public</dw:security>
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    <content type="html">Finally our heat wave has broken. Last night around 6:30 pm a rainstorm passed  through the area and dumped a wonderfully gentle but heavy sunlit rain onto us,  dropping our temps from 102F (38.8C) to 88F (31.1C) in a few minutes. Another  storm coming through in the early hours of the morning dropped the heat down  even more. I can breathe again, I don't feel like a sticky piece of rubber  baking on a hot sidewalk, I didn't stick to the sheets while sleeping, I'm SO  relieved! This was a miserable stretch of days and we really needed the break.  It's only July and we may still get some hot days, but I'm very happy about a  weekend that will only have high temps in the 80's instead of the 100's. Yippee!  &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span class="cut-wrapper"&gt;&lt;span style="display: none;" id="span-cuttag___1" class="cuttag"&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;b class="cut-open"&gt;(&amp;nbsp;&lt;/b&gt;&lt;b class="cut-text"&gt;&lt;a href="https://erulissedances.dreamwidth.org/94787.html#cutid1"&gt;pics and relaxed, cool talk below the cut&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/b&gt;&lt;b class="cut-close"&gt;&amp;nbsp;)&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;div style="display: none;" id="div-cuttag___1" aria-live="assertive"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;img src="https://www.dreamwidth.org/tools/commentcount?user=erulissedances&amp;ditemid=94787" width="30" height="12" alt="comment count unavailable" style="vertical-align: middle;"/&gt; comments</content>
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    <id>tag:dreamwidth.org,2011-04-06:733571:90461</id>
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    <title>Bloomsday and Marriage</title>
    <published>2012-06-16T10:23:52Z</published>
    <updated>2012-06-16T10:23:52Z</updated>
    <category term="attitude"/>
    <category term="dreams"/>
    <category term="editing"/>
    <category term="writing"/>
    <dw:music>Johann Sebastian Bach - Cello Suite No. 6: Gavottes</dw:music>
    <dw:mood>geeky</dw:mood>
    <dw:security>public</dw:security>
    <dw:reply-count>0</dw:reply-count>
    <content type="html">Today is Bloomsday. OK, some of you are scratching your heads and maybe even  checking your calendars seeing that there is no Bloomsday referenced on the  calendar page. But, nonetheless, it is Bloomsday. Bloomsday celebrates the day  that the protagonist of James Joyce's &amp;quot;&lt;i&gt;Ulysses&lt;/i&gt;&amp;quot; is set. It is also the  day when the author, James Joyce, met his future wife Nora Barnacle. Now I don't  know if you're a fan of Joyce or even if you have ever read the book  &amp;quot;&lt;i&gt;Ulysses&lt;/i&gt;&amp;quot;, but any good excuse for a party, right? It is celebrated  world-wide. So, why not take a bit of time and raise a glass to James Joyce.  &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span class="cut-wrapper"&gt;&lt;span style="display: none;" id="span-cuttag___1" class="cuttag"&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;b class="cut-open"&gt;(&amp;nbsp;&lt;/b&gt;&lt;b class="cut-text"&gt;&lt;a href="https://erulissedances.dreamwidth.org/90461.html#cutid1"&gt;James Joyce and grammar and thoughts on marriage below the cut&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/b&gt;&lt;b class="cut-close"&gt;&amp;nbsp;)&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;div style="display: none;" id="div-cuttag___1" aria-live="assertive"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;img src="https://www.dreamwidth.org/tools/commentcount?user=erulissedances&amp;ditemid=90461" width="30" height="12" alt="comment count unavailable" style="vertical-align: middle;"/&gt; comments</content>
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  <entry>
    <id>tag:dreamwidth.org,2011-04-06:733571:89823</id>
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    <title>Can I Have More Vacation?</title>
    <published>2012-06-13T10:42:07Z</published>
    <updated>2012-06-13T10:42:07Z</updated>
    <category term="gordon ramsey"/>
    <category term="studio day"/>
    <category term="writing"/>
    <category term="editing"/>
    <dw:music>Ola Gjeilo - Serenity (O magnum mysterium)</dw:music>
    <dw:mood>drained</dw:mood>
    <dw:security>public</dw:security>
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    <content type="html">I was determined to knock my &amp;quot;Longest Day&amp;quot; story into shape, after all, it's due  on Thursday. But I am addicted to Chef Gordon Ramsey and his two shows that are  on now - Hell's Kitchen and Master Chef. They are scheduled for Monday and  Tuesday nights and I spend too much time turning around in my chair and watching  the action/reaction of these aspiring chefs instead of writing. Add to that the  fact that my DH walks down to the computer room to &amp;quot;schmooze&amp;quot; about the shows  with me multitudes of times (more than 15 times last night) and it's no wonder  that by 9:00 pm I had only managed to do the final edit of pages 1 and 2. Argh!  &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span class="cut-wrapper"&gt;&lt;span style="display: none;" id="span-cuttag___1" class="cuttag"&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;b class="cut-open"&gt;(&amp;nbsp;&lt;/b&gt;&lt;b class="cut-text"&gt;&lt;a href="https://erulissedances.dreamwidth.org/89823.html#cutid1"&gt;Gordon Ramsey and misc below the cut&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/b&gt;&lt;b class="cut-close"&gt;&amp;nbsp;)&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;div style="display: none;" id="div-cuttag___1" aria-live="assertive"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;img src="https://www.dreamwidth.org/tools/commentcount?user=erulissedances&amp;ditemid=89823" width="30" height="12" alt="comment count unavailable" style="vertical-align: middle;"/&gt; comments</content>
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